`W.A.L.T use direct speech
The greatest adventure yet
On the weekend i took a helicopter ride thru the clouds with a paracute,then i took the most amazing jump ever over the river i did flips tricks i yelled 'WOW' this is so fun 'wahoooooooo' then i hit the water like a atom bomb hitting th e world.i then swam to shore and i said 'can i do it again'
You have good use of direct speech Dakota. Well done, but what happened to your capitals and full stops. Don't forget the basics! Mrs Larsen
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